kaash thum jata waqt wahin..
[SELF COMPOSED]
[DEDICATED TO PEOPLE WHO ARE OVER BUSY WITH THERE JOBS AND DON'T HAVE TIME FOR FRIENDS]
"Kaash Thum Jata Waqt Wahin..
Na aate hum is mukaam kabhii...
Saath rakhte the jin doston ko..
Aaj waqt hi nhin un kamino ko...
Taras gaye hain..
CCD ki coffee pine ko...
wo toot toot kar chese burst khane ko...
2 ghoont pine ko..
Aur chuski ki chusk lene ko...
Saath baithkar 2 min batiyane ko..
Thakee maar maar ke hasne ko...
Wo raat raat bhar jagne ko...
wo class mein sone ko..
Aur Daaru pikr rone ko...
Wo Janamdin par pitne ko..
Aur IP pe multicast karne ko...
The kabhi zindagi ke boss humhi..
Aaj boss aur office zindagi ho gayi...
Office ki coffee me wo mithas nhin..
IP to hai par muticast nahin..
Baaton mein jazbaat nahin..
Haste to hain par Ab wo baat nahin..
Ab wo baat nahin...
Kaash Thum Jata Waqt Wahin..
Na aate hum is mukaam kabhii..."
well said my child, i appreciate ur efforts
ReplyDeleteacha likhta hai. though hum same college mein nai the. but kaafi kuch same hai.
ReplyDeletekya baat hai sir...guddd composition..
ReplyDeletewaise daaru pee kr kabhi rote huye dekha nahi aapko....llooolllllzzzzz.... :D
@rohit garg, hahaha... acha hai yaar nhin dekha bt daaru pikar humne bhi rone ke mazze liye hain mere bhai!!
ReplyDelete@richa, hehe yaar coll koyi bhi course koyi bhi ho bt coll life is almost same everywhere...
ReplyDeletewow hehe intense :D u're a poet :)
ReplyDelete@Jhanvi, hehe nhin nhin aisakuchnhin..
ReplyDeleteBs likhne chule the kuch, Likhte chule gaye kuch..
kab wo shayeri ho gayi, pata hi nhin chula such - much..
nice one big bro...
ReplyDelete@rishi, shukriya shukriya!!
ReplyDelete@rishi, n haanbrowser update karle.. chrome 2.0 usekar rha hai 3.0 aa chuka hai.
ReplyDeletewhat an amazing composition. really heart warming. you know you should only write stuff about college life, not because you cant write other stuff but because you are just too damn good in writing on college life!!
ReplyDeleteTitle of the poem is so apt. and then there were some awesome lines:
"Kaash Thum Jata Waqt Wahin..
Na aate hum is mukaam kabhii…
Saath rakhte the jin doston ko..
Aaj waqt hi nhin un kamino ko…"
"The kabhi zindagi ke boss humhi..
Aaj boss aur office zindagi ho gayi…
Office ki coffee me wo mithas nhin..
IP to hai par muticast nahin..
Baaton mein jazbaat nahin..
Haste to hain par Ab wo baat nahin..
Ab wo baat nahin…"
brilliant stuff sir jee!!! aur kuch bhi likho college life par.
every college goer will enjoy this poem, like Richa said.
(sorry for being late...errr...extra late)
@Mayank, Thanks bro... aur koyi comment kare yana kare tera comment jaroor aata hai!! Thanks a ton bro.. n yes i do write posts abt coll wd alot of feelings n d credit goes to the amazing coll. life i had!!! Hv towrite another post if i get time..!!!
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